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ResponderBorrarNEW YEAR CELEBRATION
ResponderBorrarI will never forget the new year of my family in the year 2017 it was in GUATAPE,ANTIOQUIA in a recreational house with a lot of gunpowder and delicious dishes for the celebration the celebration started at 4:00 pm and it ended to 3:00 am it was so long but the celebration was amazing and exciting because you can see another houses watch tv series while you wait at 12:00 am for celebrate the new year the event was in december 31 of 2016 every my family were there maybe 20 persons, after the evnt i felt good because i had an amazing idea of the part
ANA ECHEVERRIA
JUAN FELIPE MORENO
ended at 3:00 am
Borrarbecause we could see other families watching tv series
while we wait until 12:am to celebrate
December 31st
I
20 members of my family were there
The end is not clear
Score: 4,3
I will never forget the new year of my family in the year 2017 it was in GUATAPE,ANTIOQUIA in a recreational house with a lot of gunpowder and delicious dishes for the celebration the celebration started it was so long but the celebration was amazing and exciting because you can see another houses watch tv series while you wait at 12:00 am for celebrate the new year the event was in december 31 of 2016 every people want to stay here because the felt well and we wait until the end of the year 2016
BorrarWedding: Juan Diego Valderrama, Alejandro Montaño Esquivel, David E. Castro
ResponderBorrarLast November, I went to one of the best weddings that I've ever been. That's when my best friend got married to his girlfriend; we all had a great time!
First, we went to the boutique to get some formal clothes to wear; my friend got a very gorgeous suit. Later, we went to the wedding at five o'clock. It was at a very luxury hotel. The wedding was full of gold and luxurious items! At seven o'clock the fiancés signed the papers. Then, the party was in full swing! There were music bustling the speakers, the food was delicious and all of my friends were there to celebrate the wedding. There were about 45 people on the room - but it was fun, though!
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BorrarThere was music
Borrarthere were about 45 people in the room
Very good job, well done. Score: 4,8
Wedding: Juan Diego Valderrama, Alejandro Montaño Esquivel, David E. Castro
BorrarLast November, I went to one of the best weddings that I've ever been. That's when my best friend got married to his girlfriend; we all had a great time!
First, we went to the boutique to get some formal clothes to wear; my friend got a very gorgeous suit. Later, we went to the wedding at five o'clock. It was at a very luxury hotel. The wedding was full of gold and luxurious items! At seven o'clock the fiancés signed the papers. Then, the party was in full swing! There was music bustling the speakers, the food was delicious and all of my friends were there to celebrate the wedding. There were about 45 people in the room - but it was fun, though!
We like the birthdays partys.
ResponderBorrarThats when my mom and my family decided make a birthday party and my family had a fantastic party at our house to celebrate.
First,my mum and my big sister went shopping for food and drink.AT six o'clock, my cousin's friends arrived for the party.At seven o'clock my brother started the barbecue in the garden and after that we cooked hot dogs and sausagues.It was a very warm night.We ate the food and then Dad started the firework display-that was a grat surprise for we.
Akemi Amaya
Valeria Bedoya
Birthday parties
Borrardecided to make
My mum and my oldest sister bought food and drinks
great surprise for us
Good work but remember to correct your mmistakes
Be careful with the spelling
Score: 4,2
We like the birthday parties.
BorrarThats when my mun and my family decided make a birthday party and my family had a fantastic party at our house to celebrate.
First,my mum and my oldest sister bought food and drinks.At six o'clock,my cousin's friends arrived for the party.At seven o'clock my brother started the barbecue in the garden and after that we cooked hot dogs and sausagues.It was very warm night.We ate the food and then Dd started the firework display-that was a grat surprise for us.
Valeria Bedoya
Akemi Amaya
In the party we find much people and delicious food ,in the party we have fund or relax,we celebrate some parties as birthday ,anniversary,events ,gradation among others .
ResponderBorrarThe others parties are tradicional celebrations these celebrations have beautiful costumes ,beautiful people .beautifuk dance and beautiful music,in the celebrations we take much fotos and much memories.
Names:paula espitia and karol oviedo
we found
Borrarmany people
we had fun
we celebrated
the other parties weretraditonal celebrations.
These...
Dont repeat beautiful, look for a synonym
We took many photos and memories
The tense you had to use was Past
Score: 3,1
In the party we found much people and delicious food,in the party we had fund or relax,we celebrated some parties as birthday ,aniversary,events,gradation among others.
BorrarThe other parties were traditional celebrations these clebrations have beautiful costumes,family.pretty dance ad nice music,in the celebrations we took much fotos and much memories.
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BorrarNEW YEAR CELEBRATION
ResponderBorrarThis celebration it is different in distinct places, for example in China the celebration no is single different in the celebration only the date is different.this celebration it is very special becouse can celebrate with the family and the importan person and have a more year.
JUANA MURILLO
VALERIA PEÑA
In China the celebration isn't
BorrarCorrect your punctuation because it is difficult to understand
It is too short, you had to write at least two paragraps
The end is not clear
Score: 3,0
CORRECTION
BorrarNEW YEAR CELEBRATION
This celebration is different in distint places, for example in China, the celebration have a different date and tradition.The objetive of this event is celebrate a new year of life with the family, friend and important persons in our life.
In this celebration the family and friends have a dinner, a toast and do count regressive, with this it starts a new year of life,chance,love and funny.
JUANA MURILLO
VALERIA PEÑA
PAULA LEAL
ResponderBorrarCAMILA FUENTES
NEW YEAR CELEBRATION
I remember that day, it was a lot of members of my family, we had an amazing party on a recreational house.i remember too that everything was awasome a lot of food, wine and my family together on my house.
it was 11.00 at night and we was waiting for the new year; we was excited, then i went to the kitchen and i saw that everithing was a disaster the wine was on the floor, the food was distribute around the kitchen and my uncle was in the middle of that disaster, we was impressing,we was together at kitchen talking about it; then at radio it sounds "happy new year, i hope that you were whit your family and freind together a lot of money and good meanings for you".
when we listened that everybody stayed at silence but from one minute to the next everybody started laugh, i dont knew what had happening
we haven't nothing to ate.So minutes later we order pizza and it was our food on new year, and my uncle had to clean everything.
I also remember
BorrarWe were
I
Everything
The food was distributed
Started laughing
I didn't know
What had happened
We didn't have nothing to eat
We ordered
Nice story, Correct your grammar and spelling mistakes
Score: 4,0
CORRECTION
Borrari remember that day, it was a lot of members of my family, we were having an amazing partyon a recreartional house. I also remember that Everything was awasome a lot of food, wine and my family together on my house.
it was 11:00 at night and we were waiting for the new year, we were excited, then i went to the kitchen and i saw that everything was a disaster, the wine was on the floor and The food was distributed around the kitchen and my uncle was in the middle of that disaster, we were impressing, we were together at kitchen talking about it; then at radio it sounds "happy new year, i hope that you were with your family and friends together a lot of money and good meanings for you..."
When we listened that, evrybody stayed at silence but from one minute to the next everybody started laughing, I didn't know what had happened .
we didn't have nothing to eat. So minutes later we ordered pizza and it was our food on new year, and also my uncle had to clean everything.
THE WEDDING OF THE MARIANA'S PARENTS
ResponderBorrarShe will never forget that March.was in March of 2017.That was when Mariana's parents decided to get married.
First, Mariana won a trip to Santa Marta.Then her parents decided to get married and travel to Santa Marta like a
Honeymoon in family.
After that they started to plan the wedding, they went to some houses of events to quote the expenses.2 months later the wedding was being real. There were about 70 people at the event.
All started with the eucharist, then they went to the reception event to take the lunch.
Finally everybody ate,danced,and enjoyed the party, and her parents were very happy.
Juan Montaña
Mariana Mora
802
Mariana's parents Wedding
BorrarDon't repeat March
the wedding was gettint real
Great that you used the connectors.
Correct your mistakes
Grade: 4,8
Mariana's parents Wedding
BorrarShe will never forget that March.was in the 2017.That was when Mariana's parents decided to get married.
First, Mariana won a trip to Santa Marta.Then her parents decided to get married and travel to Santa Marta like a
Honeymoon in family.
After that they started to plan the wedding, they went to some houses of events to quote the expenses.2 months later the wedding was gettint real. There were about 70 people at the event.
All started with the eucharist, then they went to the reception event to take the lunch.
Finally everybody ate,danced,and enjoyed the party, and her parents were very happy.
Juan Montaña
Mariana Mora
802
michel rodriguez,karol caicedo,laura clavijo
ResponderBorrarat parties you can find cakes and too many people.what you will never forget is the meeting with the people that you want more
Is to celebrate another day where you can be in the world and become more child or more adult,we can live more with the family and be further from the bad
That you love the most
BorrarYou had to write two paragraphs at least and use the past simple tense.
You didn't follow the instruction
Score: 3,1
Valeria Lopez Galvis y Ameli Avella
ResponderBorrarIn December of 2018, in new year,we met in house of the grandparents` in this, we were eating custard and buñuelos we wish the new year and we share together.
In this opportunity on this occasion we attend all Sercan family and friends that is to say almost 15 people.
After wishing us happy year we played a while with all the cousins and then we stayed at the grandparents' house.
Finally when we had all rested we went to our homes and next day we all get together for meet to make the roast at the beginning of the year.
Great you used the connectors
BorrarYou forgot to conjugate some verbs in past
Score: 4,5
topic: the new year
ResponderBorrarIts so exited for our family prepare the most important dinner in the year for start the year in a good form.
first, our small brother chose the old music (the favorite for my our family) and start the crazy party.
in the cook was our mother prepare the entrance was a mini hamburger and soda.
the next is a delicious *sancocho* with soft chichen and after a small cupcake.
but the most impotant thing is stay with the family and laugh with the strange and graciosly thing.
avril lopez
carolina puerto
thank you, next
Next time don't create all that blank space, please
Borrartopic: the new year
Its so exited for our family TO prepare the most important dinner in the year TO start the year in a good form.
in the kitchen our mother was preparing the entrance, it was a mini hamburger and soda.
but the most impotant thing is TO stay with the family.
Good job, Score: 4,5
wedding:
ResponderBorrarit's a traditional and beutiful celebration, in this we celebrate the union of two persons . That celebration normally is celebrate in a church. There are two rings the woman has a beautiful white dress and a men has a smoking
The idea was not to write the meaning of the word "wedding" but to share a personal experience related to it following the writing guide instuctions.
BorrarScore: 3,0
NAME:Sharon Ortegon and Danna Enciso .
ResponderBorrarLast party ever, it was in 21st os february. we had a amazing friends party at their house.
Fist my friends and I went the market and bought some desserts and junk food ,after that we arrived to the house and prepared the decorations of the party .
there were fourty people ,all of them had a exellent time .we felt amazing because all the people had fun and ate my father's good hamburgers .we liked to repead the party
Great work, the only thing is you didn't follow all the writing guide instructions.
BorrarScore:4,8
I'll never forget last new year. that's when my sister arrived of her trip for new year, my parents had a big celebrate.
ResponderBorrarfirst my mom and i went to the shopping for food, drink and decorations. after that my mom decorated the house and she put the food and drink on the table. at eight o'clock my family arrived and my dad played music. we started to dance. my sister called to my mom and she said that she was going to get there. my dad, mom, aunts,cousins, uncles and grandparents was happy and excited.when my sister arrived all the family greet her. then we enjoyed the celebration. it was a great evening because we were together and enjoyed.
laura reyes, alejandra ardila, danna villa
My parents had a big celebration
BorrarI
Greeted
Called my mom
Very good job. Score: 4, 5
I"ll never forget last summer, after so much time ,we met again with my friends, we had a funny afternoon and we had a increible moment together
ResponderBorrar,we eats cake and soda ,then for the night we prepare a party , we listen to music all night and dance much
laura beltran y valery zapata
We ate
Borrarat night
we prepared
we listened to music
and danced
You didn't follow the writing guide instructions
Score: 3,1
My best new year was last year, where I spent a very happy moment with my family.
ResponderBorrarOn December 31 I woke up a little bored and sad because I did not know what to do that special day, but then my family and I planned to go to the family farm in Choachí, in this, we made a chicken stew, but we did not take , so we were all thirsty, but despite this, we were not sad and everything went well, because we all enjoyed that day, in my case because I played soccer, I talked and I shared with my cousins, among other things.
Finally, at midnight we all met and had a special wine for the occasion, and everything was as we had planned, since that day we all remember that beautiful date, which started this wonderful year in our lives.
YONN CORREDOR AND NICOLAS CASTILLO
December 31st
Borrarinstead of "in this" write: there
Great work. Score: 4,8
NEW YEAR
ResponderBorrarthe last december my family and me celebrated the new year in my house
this day was very interesting and funny.
the celebration stared at the 6.00 pm we ate the dinner and later we played games, this were very funny.
when it was time to celebrate the new year, my family was very sad for the death of some people but then they was happy.
at the 1.00 am we dancing, singing and more things.
later the celebration finished at the 2.00am
NICOLL MONTAÑA
MAFE SILVA
Correct capital letters
BorrarDecember
These were
This was
They were
at 1:00
we were dancing and singing
Score:4,0
I'll never forget last new year. that's when my sister arrived of her trip for new year, my parents had a big celebration.
ResponderBorrarfirst my mom and I went to the shopping for food, drink and decorations. after that my mom decorated the house and she put the food and drink on the table. at eight o'clock my family arrived and my dad played music. we started to dance. my sister called my mom and she said that she was going to get there. my dad, mom, aunts,cousins, uncles and grandparents was happy and excited.when my sister arrived all the family greet her. then we enjoyed the celebration. it was a great evening because we were together and enjoyed.
laura reyes, alejandra ardila, danna villa
correction of the comment
ResponderBorrarMy best new year was last year, where I spent a very happy moment with my family.
On December 31 I woke up a little bored and sad because I did not know what to do that special day, but then my family and I planned to go to the family farm in Choachí, there, we made a chicken stew, but we did not take , so we were all thirsty, but despite this, we were not sad and everything went well, because we all enjoyed that day, in my case because I played soccer, I talked and I shared with my cousins, among other things.
Finally, at midnight we all met and had a special wine for the occasion, and everything was as we had planned, since that day we all remember that beautiful date, which started this wonderful year in our lives.
YONN CORREDOR AND NICOLAS CASTILLO
The New Year is a nacional holiday celebrated with our family and friends it start in January 1st, it's a moment for reflection and decide goals for the next year.Many Cultures celebrate this happy day in their own unique way. Typically the customs and traditions of happy New Years Day like eat turkey and some desserts.
ResponderBorrarI remember when my family and me, like every year went to my uncle`s house first put music so laudly and also we danced in the courtyard this is so important for me,becuause i really love my family.
Later we ate food like turkey with salad and some deserts it was delicius in this moment we talked about experiences that happened us, finally we went to our house.
Names:Alejandra Martinez Jary Cruz
National holliday
BorrarIt started
the traditions of the new year eve are: eating turkey and some desserts
play music loudly
delicious
happended to us
Good job but be careful with the spellin and ideas order
Score:4,0
names:michell rodriguez,karol caicedo,laura clavijo
ResponderBorrarnew Year
It is a celebration that takes place from December 31 to January 1, in which families gather to celebrate everything that took place the year, and carry out several traditions, such as eating 12 grapes in the first minute of the next year, asking for a corresponding wish each month, another tradition is to keep lentils in the pockets to attract money, and lastly, it is the old-year doll that tries to burn it to remove the bad energies of last year.
This celebration has been in the Colombian families since 1582, it is celebrated in different days depending on the religion, for many the new year is like what will define the following year, therefore it is very important for many families giving thanks to last year and asking for the next one.
...takes place since 31st to-1st
BorrarSuper well written, You will have the opportunity to do an oral defense on your composition than the score will be assinged.