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miércoles, 17 de octubre de 2018

Writing. Future tenses

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  1. I am going to travel to Manizales in December, I will eat a lot of food.
    I will play Playstation 4 in holidays, I am going to sleep a lot in my house, I won't go to Spain, I will go to a pool, I am going to cook cupcakes.
    I will study medicine, and I will travel to England and I am going to improve my english.
    I will get married and I am going to have children.
    I will live in a big house with pool in Medellin.
    I am going to travel around the world.
    ATT: Melissa Murillo.

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    Respuestas
    1. Well done!
      Remember it is English with capital letter
      and I will have a big house with a pool.
      score: 4,8

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  3. In my future;I am going to travel to Brazil, i am going to visit the weekend to father, i won't to marrie ,i will visit the Taj Mahal.I am going to the friday to cinema and i am going to the restaurant ,i won't have a children.I am going to study to the university.I will study the astronomy and i won't study the gastronomy

    NAME: Mariana Chacon Trejos

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    Respuestas
    1. visit my father at the weekends
      "I" always goes in capital letters
      have children beacuse children is plural,not a children
      study at the university
      I will study astronomy instead of gastronomy
      Check and correct, you had some basic mistakes: 3,6

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  4. Name: Alejandro cortes
    I am going live in Spain, I will improve my English.
    I will have a house in Spain and I am going to have a car.
    I will want three dogs and one horse.
    I will get married and I will have two kids.
    I will travel to Dubai, Egipt and France.
    I won't have cats, and I won't travel to Venezuela.
    In holidays I will go to a pool with my family and cousin.
    I will sleep a lot in holidays, i am going to study.
    I am going to play Playstation 4 in holidays, I am going to play Fifa and Fortnite and I will clean my house.

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    Respuestas
    1. Im going to live in Spain
      I will have three dogs
      "I" always goes in capital letter
      Score: 4,4

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  5. Name Alejandro Montaño

    FUTURE WILL AND BE GOING TO

    When I am 18 years I will want to study industrial engineering,in the university javeriana.
    I won't want to be lawyer.
    I AM GOING TO HAVE one children and wife
    I will travel a Europe
    my motheris going to travel of Brazil
    My dad going to travel of Antártida
    my best friend will study in Spain
    my best friend is going to go a Africa
    I am going to work in a fabric.

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    Respuestas
    1. I will travel to
      Travel to Brazil
      My dad is going to
      To go to Africa

      You sometimes forget the auxilliary verbs
      don't think in Spanish when it's tie for English
      Score: 3,8

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  6. Name: Mariana Mora

    FUTURE WILL AND BE GOING TO

    When I am 18 years old I am going to go to the university, in this moment I don't know what I'll want to study, but the only thing that I know is that I'll study something that can serve me to move internationally.
    After that, I'll travel around the world, I am going to know diferent cultures, and diferent people.
    About the 30's I'll want to get married, and after that I am going to have kids, I am not going to have more than 2.
    I hope I will be able to help poor people, and animals in the streets, with fundations.
    Finally I am going to be a happiest person,ok, I hope that.

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  7. I am going to study in spain and I will travel to Brazil,I am going to stay in a hotel five stars.I won't travel to England. My father is going to go to the stadium the Bombonera and my mother is going to travel to Africa for meet several animals that she loves,and my family will know Italy.
    Juan Pablo Peñaloza

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    Respuestas
    1. Five stars hotel
      to meet several animals

      Not many mistakes but it was too short.
      Score:4,0

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  8. I think in my future i am will to tour for Europe, after I will travel to France, I am going to study in the university, I will study straight,I won't married but I will have a childrern's, I won't live in the UK, I will live in the France, I will get a job in a important business, I won't study medicine, I won't have a lot of pets.

    Name: M. Alejandra Ramirez R.

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    Respuestas
    1. "I" always goes with capital letters
      Study "law" not streight
      Won't get married
      live in France
      in an important company
      Score: 3,6 it was too short be careful with basic mistakes

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  9. Name: Danna Camila Gomez Marin

    I will leave the house to live alone
    I am going to travel to Armenia-Colombia
    I will study in college Rosario
    I am going to study digital marketing
    I will have the tv new
    I will have one children (girl)
    I will travel to london
    I'm going to have a new computer
    I will have a horse
    I am going to have a dog

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    Respuestas
    1. study at
      I will have a new TV
      one girl not children because children is singular
      London.
      Some basic mistakes be careful. Score: 4,2

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  10. my name is juan esteban hernandez garzon and the next month wil get the belt yellow in teakwondo,in two months i will be chritmas and i am going to travel to santander and also i am going to travel to cancun in 8 months . i will soccer profesionally or astronomer. i am going to marry and childrens in a one year i am going to finish the course of swim . i am going to have a sport car i will cook the eat the meat

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    Respuestas
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    3. A yellow belt in taekwondo
      "I" goes always in capital letters
      I wull be a professional soccer player
      and have children
      a year or / one year
      swimming course
      cook and eat
      Read after writing checking grammar and spelling: 3,6

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  11. Nathalia Méndez
    My life in 5 years...
    I am going to study in the university engineering
    I am going to have a dogs and pets
    I am going to have a job
    I will Leave the country
    I am going to live with my mom
    I am going to have a mobile
    I will not to smoke
    I will not have a husband
    I will not have children

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    Respuestas
    1. I will study engineering
      I am going to have dogs and pets no (a dogs)
      I will not smoke
      Score: 4,0

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  12. in my future:
    - I will travel to Paris or USA, I am going to have a party in
    the two years very big because I want to be happy. I am going to leave scool in four years, I am going to study in the University.
    I won't leave to dance because I am a happy person doing that.
    I will have children after the twenty six years old, I will study for be a profesional dancer, I am going to take care, and help my family because are the more important in my life.
    I will get marry, and finally, I will travel around the world
    ATT: karen miranda

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    Respuestas
    1. I am going to have a big party
      leave dancing
      after 26 years of age
      study to be a professional dancer
      beacuse they are the most important in my life
      get married
      Check your writing when you finish it to correct
      Score: 4,0

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  13. I am going to travel to Italia in 2020, I love to travel .I am going to a university and going to be a lawyer .I will buy a car and house . I will a get married, I will learn other lenguages , I won't have a any daughter or son.where i going to live?i going to live in Italia I will to travel all around the word,I won't have a pets
    name:maria camila navarrete giraldo

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    Respuestas
    1. I will get married
      I won't have any daughter or son
      Where am I going to live?
      I am gointo to live...
      I will travel instead will to travel
      world
      Score: 4,0

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  14. Hello

    My name is Natalia Cárdenas and today I´m going to present my future:
    I will study math and science this afternoon, i´m going to the restaurant this afternoon, I won´t travel to Japan and China, i want have sons, I want have the love of my life, I want travel to French and Paris, I will have boyfriend later I will study medicine in the university I want have a house very big I want have a dog I want know differents countries...I will study differents idioms, I´m going to go to the supermarket this afternoon and I want know news friends

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    Respuestas
    1. I want to have two sons
      or
      I will have two sons
      I want to
      Have a boyfriend
      not idioms but languages
      Score:4,0

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  15. Hello

    My name is Juan Dgo Suarez Garzo

    I am going to present My future
    so let's started.

    I will study in the national university biology because I am interesting in that but whatever too I am going to study diferrent languajes meanwhile I will have a work for help to pay my studys and buy games or maybe I will at travel in the Amazonas but too I am going to travel to diferrent countries for this reason I am going to study diferrent languajes well I will have many cats because I love the cats. I want have children only two or one but no more I want a girlfriend that she will cheerful and beutiful and honest. well it will be my future and it is going to great and awesome .

    thank you for read and please give me a like

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    Respuestas
    1. let's get started or let's start
      I will study biology at National University of Colombia
      I am interested not interesting
      different
      have a work to help
      my studies
      I will travel to Amazonas
      I want to have children
      remember to use verbs after auxilliaries
      Score: 4,5

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  16. SARA VANESSA APARICIO MUÑOZ
    I will study modeling,straight, and decorate of interior next the exit university Militar , look for work and next of have an work steady travel for the world , next of travel for the world going to have husband and two daughter and your names Salome and Mia , I going to have hause in the Francia and two cars , two plane ,five hause in different place of the world and many dog and cat .
    I going to profecional .

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    Respuestas
    1. interior designer
      after graduating from Military University
      of having
      a work not an work
      I am going to have a house in France
      two planes
      five houses
      different places
      many dogs and cats
      I am going to be prefessional

      Be careful with singulars and plurals
      Score: 3,6

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  17. Evelyn Sofia Muñoz Vargas.

    I'm going to my house this night.
    I'm going to Manizales this weekend.
    I'm going to be reporter.
    I'm going to have cat.
    I'm going to fly in plane to Cali.
    I'm going to see my grandparents.

    I will study for math this week.
    I will not have mistreat a pet.
    I will not have boyfriend.
    I will travel to Mexico.

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    Respuestas
    1. Este comentario ha sido eliminado por el autor.

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    2. Be careful with articles ( a pet for example)
      You forgot the main verbs in the first senteces
      Score: 3,6

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  18. Laura castellanos
    Iam going to the travel a europe
    Iam going to the social studies
    I will have 1 children
    I am goin to get married
    My mother goin to the travel a United States
    My dad travel a Argentina
    I am not going to smoke
    I will to tatto
    I going to the buy a car
    I will make a channel in youtube

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  19. I will travel and not (to travel)
    different countries and not differents
    not clear the use of the word object
    to be a happy person an dnot for be
    get married and nor get marry
    In general very good work. Score: 4,3

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