Hey class, as explained previously, write your samples of easy menus following the workshop in page 5. Work in pairs. Write your texts as comments on this post.
Hi, we are Melissa Murillo and Alana Prieto. Here are our new ideas for the menu. First, we have some fruits. We like cherry, watermelon, strawberry and peach. After that we have chicken salad for the starter. Next is the main course, today it's soup with rice, fish and lemon and for the drink, we have soda. Finally our favourite dessert! there's fruit salad with ice cream beacuse it's easy to make. enjoy your meal.
janel y mari Good morning, today I offer you of First a seafood casserole and fruit. After that a delicious lemonade with ice. Next a salmon burger with french fries and additional sauces. Finally a cup of ice cream with biscuit.
Hi,our name are:juan esteban hernandez garzon and daniel felipe sanabria solano . today are making a new menu: FIRST,we have got some chisps.we love fries but these to in the end . NEXT, we are cooking the beaf , vegetables and cheese AFTER THAT, we are putting the bread and all in his order FINALLY,the fries and tomatoe sauce and, we are putting in a plate whith the burger and the menu is ready
Our names are Esteban Hernandez and Daniel Sanabria (plural and upper case at names) to/in the end: use at better after that (brad and all in his order) not clear what order? His is de possessive for a man Score: 4.0 Sounds interesting but be careful with logical order
Hi,my name is Edgar Cortes and Juan Pablo Peñaloza. Good afternoon,today them offer of starter pasty and fruit. The mainj course pasta and breast a the griddle and of accompaniment chips and salad , of drink juice of lemond and fizzy drink ,of dessert cake of orange and brownie with ice cream . Thanks for his visit
my name is (our names are) today them offer (today we offer) The mainj course pasta (the main course is pasta) of dessert cake of orange (The dessert is orange cake) Score:4.0 I like the idea but be careful to write correctly
NAMES : SARA MUÑOZ , KAREN CASTILLO Y LUISA SIERRA . GOOD AFTERNON TEACHER WE ARE GOING TO THE PRESENT EASY MENU BLOG FIRST , A STARTER PRAWN COHABIT FROM LIME AND SAUCE TOMATOE AFTER THAT, CREAM FROM CHIKEN NEXT, IS THE MAIN COURSE FISH, SALAD, CHIPS,LIME,CAHABIT SAUCE TOMATOE AND JUICE. FINALLY, A ICE CREAM FROM VANILLA, CHOCOLATE AND COOKIE
ENJOY YOUR MEAL!!!AND JOIN ME NEXT MONTH FOR ANOTHER EASY MENU.
firt,we've some snacks,we have chiken sandwich and cheese burger. after that, we've got french onion soup or tomato soup. next is the main course,we've got italian cheese and tomato pizza. they is very tasty food and cohabit with fresh oranje juice. finish,we've got a dessert there's fruit salad and cream.It's very delicious and creative yeah!1! very delicious emjoy your meal!!! att:Akemi Amaya y Alejandra Tinjaca
firt,we've some snacks First, We've got some... French onion soup... Italian Finish ---> (Finally) very delicious ----> really delicious Good job. Score: 4,5
Karen Miranda,Valeria Lopez Galvis y Maria Alejandra Ramirez
Hello welcome to ours restaurant European
First the start we offer you bent, first fruit,eggs with sausage and coffe that with two breads.the price is:$18.700 After that the lunch:salad with onions and tomatoes,fish with rice and potatoes.The price is:$25.500 Next we offter them the drinks :water, juice, fizzy drinks all drinks to $6000 Finally this is the dessert of the day:ice cream can wait for.The price is :$2000 Enjoy your meal!
Hello welcome to ours restaurant European (our European restaurant) the start we offer you are: Next we offter them (they or you?) Good job be careful with subject pronouns. Score: 4,3
Hello!! My name is Mariana Chacón and the mi friend is Sofia Muñoz. Welcome to ours restaurant in the Ingland "OFIMAR". This is the menu: {FIRST} º The best breakfast for begin the day--Egg with bread and milk chocolaty. {AFTER THAT} º One nutritious apple, banana and blackberry with the milk almond. {NEXT} ºThe lunch healthy is the salad egg, pasta with rice and natural juice. {FINALLY} ºThe delicious milk shake and nuts.
RESTAURANT Hello,here are my new ideas for a tasty fist, you've got many salads have chicken salad, tomato salad,egg salad and fruts salad . after than you've got meat for take the salad have chicken ,beef and pork. netx is the main course you've got can find Italian chese, tomato pizza ,vegetables pasta. finally can find drinks and desserts how mineral water ,orange juice ,english tea ,fruit and cream and ice cream . NAMES : Laura Castellanos y Danna Enciso
...for a tasty menu... First...Fruit salad After that... (meat: What kind:pork, fish, beef, steak?) to take not for take "You've got" or "you can find" (not both) Finally, you can find... instead of "how" use "like" or "such" Score 4.0
EAT WITH THE MENU OF CAMI AND JUAN Good afternoon in this menu we have a new idea of plates different but today we are presented: The mega pizza on with ice cream First, I should have the mass of the pizza after that, we should do a circle with the mass in a table for do the pizza, now, put the tomatoe sauce thin or thickness about your like . Next, we chop the cheese and we chase out in the pizza,now, we cut the mushrooms and we agree in the pizza, now, we go to a super market and we buy pepper,salame, a cup of ice cream, pine appple, ham and turkey. after that,we cut the salame,the pine apple,the ham, the turkey and the pepper and we put these ingredients in the pizza. Finally, we put the pizza into the oven, after we kick off the pizza the oven and put the ice cream and if you want dessert there are apple pie. ENJOY THE FOOD AND THANK YOU FOR EAT IN HERE SING: Juan Suarez and Camila Carmona
today we present: mega pizza with ice cream (funny+) ...to do the pizza (not for do) ... depends on your taste(about your like) Thank you for eating... use ing with a verb after a preposition Super nice job. I liked it a lot. Score:5,0
menu: Hi.Here are our new ideas for a tasty menu first, we´ve got some snacks. We love cookies and nuts after that. We´ve got these fun meat pie. Next is the main course. Today it´s mini hamburgers with lettuce, tomato, onion, meat,ketchup and breat.We love making these. finally, my favorite:dessert waffles with ice cream,We like this because is delicious, and it´s easy to make. just prepare the mixture,put it in the pan, waith 5 minutes and put the ice crem. Enjoy your meal! And join we next month for another easy menu. Thanks!
First, We´ve got some drinks. Juice, beer, water, stoul, lage. We love a milk and soda.
After that, We´ve got these delicious snaks, to before the lunch how:sanduwich, chips, swets, beans and eat it with a fruit how: apple, banana, orange, papaya, nuts. We like grape
Next we´ve got delicious vegetales how: salad, potatoes, onion, garlig
Finally. We meat: chicken, bacon, quail, liver,ham,duck,pork,belf,lamb
JAI.... What's this? We love milk not "a milk" " to before the lunch how": ...that you can eat before the lunch such... vegetables like or such:... "We meat" not clear Be careful on logical order. Score: 4.0
That is a good restaurant mexican (This is a good Mexican restaurant) First I come to offer many serving especial of today. (many special services or maybe you meant "main course") We offer or they offer The menus for today or today's menu Good job. Work on order sentence Score: 4,0
Hi, we are Melissa Murillo and Alana Prieto.
ResponderBorrarHere are our new ideas for the menu.
First, we have some fruits. We like cherry, watermelon, strawberry and peach.
After that we have chicken salad for the starter.
Next is the main course, today it's soup with rice, fish and lemon and for the drink, we have soda.
Finally our favourite dessert! there's fruit salad with ice cream beacuse it's easy to make.
enjoy your meal.
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BorrarNice options and well written. Congrats. You got a 5.0
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ResponderBorrarjanel y mari
ResponderBorrarGood morning, today I offer you of First a seafood casserole and fruit.
After that a delicious lemonade with ice.
Next a salmon burger with french fries and additional sauces.
Finally a cup of ice cream with biscuit.
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BorrarInstead of "of first" use the word starter.
BorrarAfer that, use comma
Good job. 4.3
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ResponderBorrarHi,our name are:juan esteban hernandez garzon and daniel felipe sanabria solano .
ResponderBorrartoday are making a new menu:
FIRST,we have got some chisps.we love fries but these to in the end .
NEXT, we are cooking the beaf , vegetables and cheese
AFTER THAT, we are putting the bread and all in his order
FINALLY,the fries and tomatoe sauce and, we are putting in a plate whith the burger
and the menu is ready
Our names are Esteban Hernandez and Daniel Sanabria
Borrar(plural and upper case at names)
to/in the end: use at better
after that (brad and all in his order) not clear what order? His is de possessive for a man
Score: 4.0 Sounds interesting but be careful with logical order
Hi,my name is Edgar Cortes and Juan Pablo Peñaloza.
ResponderBorrarGood afternoon,today them offer of starter pasty and fruit.
The mainj course pasta and breast a the griddle and of accompaniment chips and salad , of drink juice of lemond and fizzy drink ,of dessert cake of orange and brownie with ice
cream .
Thanks for his visit
my name is (our names are)
Borrartoday them offer (today we offer)
The mainj course pasta (the main course is pasta)
of dessert cake of orange (The dessert is orange cake)
Score:4.0 I like the idea but be careful to write correctly
NAMES : SARA MUÑOZ , KAREN CASTILLO Y LUISA SIERRA .
ResponderBorrarGOOD AFTERNON TEACHER
WE ARE GOING TO THE PRESENT EASY MENU BLOG
FIRST , A STARTER PRAWN COHABIT FROM LIME AND SAUCE TOMATOE
AFTER THAT, CREAM FROM CHIKEN
NEXT, IS THE MAIN COURSE FISH, SALAD, CHIPS,LIME,CAHABIT SAUCE TOMATOE AND JUICE.
FINALLY, A ICE CREAM FROM VANILLA, CHOCOLATE AND COOKIE
ENJOY YOUR MEAL!!!AND JOIN ME NEXT MONTH FOR ANOTHER EASY MENU.
WE ARE GOING TO THE PRESENT EASY MENU BLOG
BorrarWe are going to present an easy menu
A STARTER PRAWN COHABIT FROM LIME AND SAUCE TOMATOE
for the starter: prawns with lime and tomatoe sauce
AFTER THAT, CREAM FROM CHIKEN
(not clear)
a ice cream: an ice cream
The project is well planned but you need to focus on the grammar mistakes as some of them are basic. Score: 3,5
Hi, here are many new ideas
ResponderBorrarfor a tasty menu.
firt,we've some snacks,we have chiken sandwich and cheese burger.
after that, we've got french onion soup or tomato soup.
next is the main course,we've got italian cheese and tomato pizza. they is very tasty food and cohabit with fresh oranje juice.
finish,we've got a dessert there's fruit salad and cream.It's very delicious and creative yeah!1! very delicious
emjoy your meal!!! att:Akemi Amaya y Alejandra Tinjaca
firt,we've some snacks
BorrarFirst, We've got some...
French onion soup... Italian
Finish ---> (Finally)
very delicious ----> really delicious
Good job. Score: 4,5
Karen Miranda,Valeria Lopez Galvis y Maria Alejandra Ramirez
ResponderBorrarHello welcome to ours restaurant European
First the start we offer you bent, first fruit,eggs with sausage and coffe that with two breads.the price is:$18.700
After that the lunch:salad with onions and tomatoes,fish with rice and potatoes.The price is:$25.500
Next we offter them the drinks :water, juice, fizzy drinks all drinks to $6000
Finally this is the dessert of the day:ice cream can wait for.The price is :$2000
Enjoy your meal!
Hello welcome to ours restaurant European
Borrar(our European restaurant)
the start we offer you are:
Next we offter them
(they or you?)
Good job be careful with subject pronouns. Score: 4,3
Hello!!
ResponderBorrarMy name is Mariana Chacón and the mi friend is Sofia Muñoz.
Welcome to ours restaurant in the
Ingland "OFIMAR".
This is the menu:
{FIRST}
º The best breakfast for begin the day--Egg with bread and milk chocolaty.
{AFTER THAT}
º One nutritious apple, banana and blackberry with the milk almond.
{NEXT}
ºThe lunch healthy is the salad egg, pasta with rice and natural juice.
{FINALLY}
ºThe delicious milk shake and nuts.
My name is Mariana Chacón and the mi friend is Sofia Muñoz.
Borrar...and my friend's is Sofia Muñoz...
Welcome to ours restaurant in the
---->Welcome to our restaurant in England
º The best breakfast for begin the day--Egg with bread and milk chocolaty.
To begin, milk chocolate
... with the milk almond---> with almond milk
Healthy lunch is: Egg Salad, pasta, rice and natural juice
Some basic grammar mistakes be careful when writing
The menu is complete I liked that. Score: 3,7
RESTAURANT
ResponderBorrarHello,here are my new ideas for a tasty
fist, you've got many salads have chicken salad, tomato salad,egg salad and fruts salad .
after than you've got meat for take the salad have chicken ,beef and pork.
netx is the main course you've got can find Italian chese, tomato pizza ,vegetables pasta.
finally can find drinks and desserts how mineral water ,orange juice ,english tea ,fruit and cream and ice cream .
NAMES : Laura Castellanos y Danna Enciso
...for a tasty menu...
BorrarFirst...Fruit salad
After that... (meat: What kind:pork, fish, beef, steak?)
to take not for take
"You've got" or "you can find" (not both)
Finally, you can find... instead of "how" use "like" or "such"
Score 4.0
EAT WITH THE MENU OF CAMI AND JUAN
ResponderBorrarGood afternoon in this menu we have a new idea of plates different but today we are presented: The mega pizza on with ice cream
First, I should have the mass of the pizza
after that, we should do a circle with the mass in a table for do the pizza, now, put the tomatoe sauce thin or thickness about your like .
Next, we chop the cheese and we chase out in the pizza,now, we cut the mushrooms and we agree in the pizza, now, we go to a super market and we buy pepper,salame, a cup of ice cream, pine appple, ham and turkey.
after that,we cut the salame,the pine apple,the ham, the turkey and the pepper and we put these ingredients in the pizza.
Finally, we put the pizza into the oven, after we kick off the pizza the oven and put the ice cream and if you want dessert there are apple pie.
ENJOY THE FOOD AND THANK YOU FOR EAT IN HERE
SING: Juan Suarez and Camila Carmona
today we present:
Borrarmega pizza with ice cream (funny+)
...to do the pizza (not for do)
... depends on your taste(about your like)
Thank you for eating... use ing with a verb after a preposition
Super nice job. I liked it a lot. Score:5,0
Mariana Mora Gonzalez-Nathalia Mendez Dominguez
ResponderBorrarmenu:
Hi.Here are our new ideas for a tasty menu
first, we´ve got some snacks. We love cookies and nuts
after that. We´ve got these fun meat pie.
Next is the main course. Today it´s mini hamburgers with lettuce, tomato, onion, meat,ketchup and breat.We love making these.
finally, my favorite:dessert waffles with ice cream,We like this because is delicious, and it´s easy to make.
just prepare the mixture,put it in the pan, waith 5 minutes and put the ice crem.
Enjoy your meal! And join we next month for another easy menu.
Thanks!
Great job. You've got 5,0 Congrats
BorrarNames: Laura Valentina Vargas:) and Natalia Cárdenas Martinez:)
ResponderBorrarMenú:: Fruit salad and cream:)
FIRST, we chop the fruits:Banana,strawberry,Apple and kiwi
After the fruits we put them in a container and add milk cream
NEXT, we scratched the cheese next we scratch the cheese and add it in the bowl of the fruit salad...:)
FINALLY, we add blackberry sauce,and a fork is placed
now he's ready to eat¡¡¡Mmmmmm Delicious:)
we scratched the cheese next we scratch (avoit this repetition)
Borrarnow he's ready (he or you?) not clear
Great job. Score: 4,3
Alejandro Montaño y Jorge Rojas.
ResponderBorrarJAI
Hello, this is our menu
First, We´ve got some drinks. Juice, beer, water, stoul, lage. We love a milk and soda.
After that, We´ve got these delicious snaks, to before the lunch how:sanduwich, chips, swets, beans and eat it with a fruit how: apple, banana, orange, papaya, nuts. We like grape
Next we´ve got delicious vegetales how: salad, potatoes, onion, garlig
Finally. We meat: chicken, bacon, quail, liver,ham,duck,pork,belf,lamb
additional:rice, pasta,
thanks...
JAI.... What's this?
BorrarWe love milk not "a milk"
" to before the lunch how": ...that you can eat before the lunch such...
vegetables like or such:...
"We meat" not clear
Be careful on logical order. Score: 4.0
That is a good restaurant mexican
ResponderBorrar(This is a good Mexican restaurant)
First I come to offer many serving especial of today.
(many special services or maybe you meant "main course")
We offer or they offer
The menus for today or today's menu
Good job. Work on order sentence Score: 4,0