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Good afternoon Mrs. Jenkins,
ResponderBorrarThank you for the invitation. I am pleased to have the opportunity to attend.
If I may ask, I desire some directions on how to get to the office in central Leeds. As you probably know, I have never visited Leeds, our office is at downtown Glasgow and all of our business is held at your office in Edinburgh.
I would like to invite a colleague of mine as my company. I wish to go with our Marketing Inspector, so we could have dinner after the presentations and talk about our business relationships.
Cordially,
Will J. Smith
CEO Scottplace LLC
Jary Cruz Leuro, 802
BorrarJuan Diego Valderrama, 802
Great job!
BorrarGood use of the passive voice.
5,0
I would like to tell you that i'm pleased for your invitation and im gonna help you with your new project renewable energy and we will need it in the future because in Colombia we will need it.
ResponderBorrarIf you have any questions contact me by my email or by
mobile/cell (on 3102259170).
Cordially I will to talk you later
CEO JUAN FELIPE MORENO CARDENAS
JUAN DIEGO VARGAS
and thank you so much for your invitation.
Check puntuation
BorrarCheck the reason behind a statement "we will need it, because we will need it" ?
You missed some information which was required
Score: 3,7
Dear Dr. Sue Jenkins
ResponderBorrarI would like to thank you for inviting me to your event, which I will be happy to attend
I would like to have a instructions for the event as:
-Suit tipe
-Time of entry
-Departure Time
-Date of the event
Finally I would like to know if I can bring a companion or partner to your renewable energy event.
Thank you for take my observations into account and have them answered in time so that you can attend correctly.
Cordially Mafe and Valeria
Check plurals and singulars
Borraruse ing with verbs after a preposition
Check punctuation
Score: 3,8
Dear Mrs. Jenkins
ResponderBorrarI am writing on behalf of my company and me to thank to you and your company for the invitation.
We are pleased to you for have thought in us and we are going to accepted the invitation and participate in the event.
For us there is not any impediment to not to want help with the project, because our goal is help the enviroment, in that case with the renewable energy, that is our source of life.
Is it acceptable if I bring a colleague with me to the event?
Without nothing more to say. Have a good day and see you soon.
Cordialy Mr. Smith
Mariana Mora- Valeria Bedoya 802
Remember to use ing with verbs after a preposition.
BorrarUse TO before a verb when it is infinitive
Score: 4,5
Dear Sue Jenkis.
ResponderBorrari'm happy to recive this invitation again this year,but i need some instructions for the place and the journey, this time i won't lose if you give me a instructions please, this year i will stay with my best friend, i want know if he can go with me this time, because he love your thecnology, but i need permission from us.
This time ,please answer my e-mail quickly , i wish their anser this Sunday for prepare all in my work,because i have some reunnions ,i¡m happy this year because again my company go again with us in your presentations.
I will be in touch with you and if any unforeseen event arises I will tell you.
Cordially.
Mr.Smith
Akemi Amaya 802
Check punctuation, it is I not i
BorrarCheck spelling
He loveS
Check the the sentence order.
Score: 4,0
GOOD MORNING MR Sue Jenkins:
ResponderBorrarthank you for the invitation, Could you inform me about the alternate routes to arrive?
Could make a question, it is possible to invite a friend for you celebration,the boy is very calm and respectuful, his name is Carlos.
For more details please inform me at the following email;Industri23@gmail.com, or you could call me at the number 789123
cordially,
"Mr Smith"
Check punctuation.
BorrarSome questions miss the subject
Check the sentence order
Check the example format and follow it as a formal mail.
Score: 4,0
Dear mrs. Jenkins
ResponderBorrarI am writing for express thanks to give me an invitation and confirm my attendance to the presentations of the future renewable energy.
i express thanks if you can give me instructions about the event for example what wardrobe can i use, also about the hour of the event and the address and an other vital information.
finally i have a question ,Can i go whit a colleague?
Cordially mr. Smith
Maria Alejandra Ardila
Karol Sofia Caicedo
Use ing with verbs after a preposition
BorrarCheck the punctuation. It is I not i
Try to organize it better next time.
Score: 4.0
Good moorning Sue Jenkins
ResponderBorrarThank u for you invitation at the presentations for the renewable energy,but i have other things to do, one of this things its my daughter birthay and for this reason i cant go to this event.
we know how is important this situation but for our is more important the Saras birthay than your event, one more time, thank u some much
Laura Beltran
Paula Leal
Ana Echeverria
Check the use of posessives.
BorrarCheck the punctuation.
Check the spelling.
Study the object pronouns.
You missed some information.
Score: 3,5
AVRIL LOPEZ / CAMILA FUENTES
ResponderBorrarDear Ms. Sue Jenkins
Thank you for the invitation,
you could tell me about the differents directions, forms to arrive there, but I have a question, could I arrive there with a friend, is that my car is damaged,and my friend said that he can drive me to.
So in any case tell my about it,If is possible I confirm my attendance.
Thank you again for the invitation, I miss you, See you at.
Sincerely yours
Mr. Smith
Adjectives are not written in plural
BorrarCheck your punctuation.
Study possessives and object pronouns.
Score: 4.0
Dear sue jenkins
ResponderBorrarI am thankful for receiving the invitation, because it is a honour to be invited yo this important event. For me is very important to represent the future of the renewable energy.
I am interested in this invitation then I acceptable, but I yo need know where is this event, I need know the direction and the schedule as well as I to need know if I con go with a colleague for help me, wait this answer
Sincerely
Mr. Smith
JUANA MURILLO
LAURA REYES
When the first sound of a word is a vowel we use an not a.
BorrarAcceptable is not a verb.
Check the spelling and punctuation.
You missed some information.
Score: 3,5
Dear Sue Jenkins
ResponderBorrari will accept your invitation of your renewable invitation because we
will need the project in our country in colombia wespend a lot of energy and this is a best regard i'm very pleased sincery i will use it and i will see you in the project
CEO ANDRES DAVID FIGUEROA
CEO NICOLAS CASTILLO
See you later Sue Jenkins in our new project and thank you so much for your invitation. i liked your attendance.
I is always in capital
BorrarCheck your punctuation and sentence order
You missed information.
Score: 3,5
Dear Sue Jenkins
ResponderBorrarI am Mr. Smith
cordially I write to you because I am going to go to that event
What is the direction of event?
I am going to call you on number 07867 7433123
If I go to the event will I have to bring gift?
I have a good idea for the renewable energy presentation
sincerely,I think that us can save the world
Will I have to speak in the world-renowned presentation?
Best regards to you
I am going to go to the event
sincerily.
Alejandro Montaño and David Castro
Use articles before nouns when needed
BorrarStudy the difference between object and subject pronouns
Score: 4,0
Good morning
ResponderBorrarI'm feel happy for the notice of preparation about the renewable energy and yours experts,the people that know these presentations,I accept the invitation.Thanks for the chance
I have any questions ;Where is the event going to take place and at what time to originate.
I wish you a lot of blessings and here I say goodbye
yours faithfully
Mr.Smith
Madam Sue Jenkins
PR Manager Reef Technologies plc
Marìa Amòrtegui -802
Check the correct use of possessives
BorrarAny is only for negative and questions
I'm feel is not correct
Score: 3,6
Good morning
ResponderBorrarDear Mrs.Sue Jenkins
first thank you for your friendly invitation.
It will be a pleasure be present in your event, however I have some questions about it.
-To begin with, I want to know if is possible that I can bring a companion, she is studying international bussines and she can give us new ideas. Also I would want to know what is the objetive of this project and if do the presentations are going to give me some benefits to my company.
finally I want to highligth that I am interesting is this project, although this comunicate is not clear because do not say where is the meeting.
Cordially,
Mr. Smith
Danna Villa y Valerie Zapata
Check your punctuation and spelling.
BorrarUse subject pronouns in each sentence
Score: 4,3
Dear Sue Jenkins,
ResponderBorrarI tanks you for your invitation
We will gladly attend your event as we are interested in your presentation of the implementation of renewable energies.
We would like to resibir indications required to arrive at the offices of the center Leeds, we would like to know that day the event will take place.
we would like to know if you can bring a companion, we would love to know the dress code and until what time the event will take place.
Best regards to Reef Technologies and thank you for inviting us to your event as we would like to contribute to your cause.
att:Sr. Smith
Check your spelling
BorrarIt is clear you used the translator "resibir" ---> recibir
Score: 3,4
Dear miss Sue Jenkins
ResponderBorrarMy name Smith
I want to thank you for the invitation,I inform you let I decided accept.
please give me more information and instructions, also directions for arrive to the meeting.
Can I go to the meeting with a colleague?
please respond this email with a email or a phone call
you can contact me by email or cell(on 5766645)
thank you for your attention
Cordially,
Smith
PR manager ecology company cl
ameli y karol
Use TO before verbs in infinitive
BorrarThere are some extra words not needed
You missed some infomation
Score: 3,8
Sue Jenkins
ResponderBorrargood morning
My name is Smith
Thanks for your invitation. I would be happy to go to the event that you are preparing, I ask you to please give me the correct directions to get to the place and know the exact time.
I wanted to know if I can be accompanied by a colleague to the event to which I am invited because he is very interested in the topics that will be developed.
I'll be in touch with you in the next few days
thanks you
Michel y Valeria
Check Capital letters and punctuation.
BorrarYou missed some information
Score: 4,3
Greetings Mrs. Jenkins,
ResponderBorrarThank you for the invitation and it will be very special to be able to attend this one.
Although, I need certain instructions to guide me to the office in downtown Leeds. because I have not had the fortune to visit Leeds, our work point is in the north of Liverpool
By the way, I would like to invite a colleague or colleague, who will be by my side throughout the event and will enjoy it with me. .
Sincerely, Yonn Corredor
Check the format of a formal mail.
BorrarCheck your punctuation
Score: 4,5
You need a verb after Will
ResponderBorrarStudy the use of possessives vs. object pronouns
Prompt is not the word you mean
Score: 3,6