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Maria Camila Navarrete,Karen Miranda y Maria Alejandra Ramirez
ResponderBorrarDear Sue Jenkins.
Thank for your invition to the event of the future of
renewable energy, I am interest in attend, because I am interest in help to the world
I like getting intructions about the event for example what time is it,
the vestiment is elgant or informal, what is the ubication of event and if I take a present.
Finally I am know if have take a colleague with you to the event because I like what the most persons see you event.
Thank for your time, I look forward to receiving your reply.
Cordially Sue Jenkins
Work on punctuation, question and phrase order as the last part of the text is not clear. Vestiment is not the proper word.
BorrarScore: 3,8
Dear Sue Jenkins.
ResponderBorrarWe thanking you for the invitation to this important event.
We confirm the attending with this email.
In any thing we are so grateful to help you and again thnak you for this invitation.
We are informed about all of this event, we are going to communicate with you if we have any dude.
Sincerely yours...
Melissa Murillo and Juan David Caro.
Be careful with the spelling.
Borrar"Dude" is not what you want to say.
Work on the use of the ING
Some information was missed
Score: 3,8
Names: Alejandro Cortes and Juan Peñaloza
ResponderBorrarWe thank you for the invitation and with pleasure we are there,for can attend,we need the adress of the place and the company of a friend because is the best environmentalist of the association , if possible, nevertheless we confirm the assist of the huge event for his great importance for the care of a best world and very clean and whith this we manage raise awareness to the people so that improve the style of live.
Best Regards : Association of the Enviroment
for me your score are 5.0
BorrarSome tenses mistakes.
BorrarWork on punctuation.
Assistance.
The last part is not clear. Phrase order mistakes.
Score: 3,7
We officially thank you for the invitation, we also thank you for taking us into account for this event.
ResponderBorrarWe would like the idea of assist at the event, but we neet a direction of the place because in the e-mail you talk of the event but not give me the diraccion of the place.
And I have one question, i can assist with a friend, because when he listen the invitacion he was very happy, because at he likes the events.
Sincerely
Nicolas Cardenas y Sebastian Lopez
Spelling mistakes
BorrarQuestion order mistakes
Some incorrect use of articles: a/an/the
Score: 4,0
Good morning
ResponderBorrarDear Sue Jenkins
Thank for your invitation for the event.
With this statement i want to inform, i am going to event and please can you give me the directions of the event and please the time start the event.
I am going to invite my friend Santiago Martinez because his interested the tecnology and sciences.
Also, I wanted to ask you, if the event is elegant or informal?
How long is the event?
Finally, I wanted to ask you, if there is a parking near to the event?
Thank for your attention
Have a good day
And see you in the event
Bye
Phrase order mistakes
Borrar"I" is alwasys in capital letter
You missed some words to give coherence
Socore: 4,3
United States New Yor August 2
ResponderBorrarFor Miss Charlie
With kind regards to you, Miss, from Jamaica we want to inform you about the contest and modeling that will be presented in Jamaica, there will be different types of models with different types of clothes and makeup, the winner will get an award this will be according to fashion and makeup that you have, we look forward to your precense in jamaica since it will be one of the most beautiful presentations that will be this Friday, october 13.
We wait for you there you are a great element for the contest of the year
Sincerely Natalia Vanegas and Natalia Cárdenas
✌ :D
2nd, To: Mss Charlie
BorrarThis was not written by you!
And it is not about the mail I gave!
Score: 1,0
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ResponderBorrarGoodmorning Sue Jenkins!
ResponderBorrarThank you so much for the invitation, I'm very happy and the reason is that you invite me for this event. Of course I am going to go, this event is very special for me and I know a person that interested in this event. So I want to invite her and I want to ask you. May I go with my friend?
Can you give me the address for arrive to the event please?
How must we go to wear for the event?
Finally, I think what this event will be very amazing, well the renewable energy it's good because it reduces the pollution as well as it helps to care our beautiful planet.
So I am waiting for your answers. Thank you
Cordially
Smith.
alejandro naranjo y juan diego suarez
Some mistakes with the past simple and phrase order.
BorrarScore: 4,5
By:Nelson Gordillo and Jorge Rojas
ResponderBorrarDear Mrs. Sue Jenkins,
We are placed with your invitation, we thank you, but we don't think that we need change the ideology of our business, because in this moment we are so great, but we thank you, if any day we need your suggestion, because that is very important in the future.
Finally, we are going to go there .
Thank you for your attention, we call you if we need more information about your advice.
With care, Nelson Gordillo and Jorge Rojas.
We use "TO" when having two verbs together: need TO change
BorrarScore: 4,5
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ResponderBorrarEE.UU, August 2nd 2019 Friday
ResponderBorrarDear Mateus...
Our names are Nathalia and Sofia.
We want to make a great invitation to the red carpet in the USA, you must attend on August 20 at 5:30 pm taking into account that the costumes should be alluding to the 90s.
There will be famous people from the big screens of the cinema. We will be able to share a pleasant moment with them through an exclusive dinner with chef Daniela Soto-Innes who was awarded the World's Best Female Chef 2019 award, for the best chef in the world.
We hope you attend the big red carpet.
Successes!
This is not the task instructed. Not even the topic of the mail.
BorrarScore: 1,0
Mr. Marcus
ResponderBorrarA cordial greeting by Mr. Smith. It's a pleasure for me your invitation. Of course I'm going to go, I like to see you again.
Mr. Marcus I have a question for you, Can I go with a partner, she is my girlfriend and also a confidence partner, they was with me and they was with me when I Saw your email, they will be fascinating, if they can go with me.
With regards Mr. Smith and partners
Paula Montenegro y Laura herrera
What is the verb to be in past for They?
BorrarStudy the use of Would
Score: 3,7
To: Sue Jenkins
ResponderBorrarThrough this mail we give thanks for the invitation, if we would like to attend the event
but we would like to know where to place the event and if maybe we could take a companion part who knows the company better through this statement we confirm our attendance at the event.
cordially:
mariana chacon, tomas bonilla
"if" is not affirmative
Borrar"Would" was not well used
There are word and sentence order mistakes
Check punctuation
Score: 3.4
Mr. Sue Jenkins
ResponderBorrarGood afternoon
Comfirmed the attendance to the event of the presentations of renewable energy because we are quite interested in this topic.
Since this can improve the vision of ecological change, I am grateful that I was remembered and invited to this important event.
I'm on the lookout for your instructions.
Once again I thank you for your invitation and I hope to be able to bring a guest.
if you'd like to talk to me, call from 8:00AM to 10:00PM.
best regards
Mr. Smith
Submitted by Danna Camila Gomez Marin and Alejandra Tinjacá Urrea
Remember to use subject pronouns in each sentence
BorrarCheck the punctuation
score: 4,3
Dear Sue Jenkins
ResponderBorrarI'm plased with your invitation to this important event.
I'm going to go, if you need any help, I will help you in any thing.
I need to know, how I can go dressed? It's formal or informal?
Please give me all the information about this event.
Again thank you for this invitation.
Sincerely yours...
Mariana Fonseca Roa
Read examples so you can improve.
BorrarYou missed some questions
Check punctuation
Score: 4,0
Dear Sue Jenkins
ResponderBorrarWe are so greatful for this invitation to this important event.
We confirm our asist to this event.
we need to know, how we can arrive to wear dreesed?
Can you give us the addrees please?
I have a good friend that she is interesting in go and participate in this event and I want to invite.
Can I bring at my friend please?
“Sincerely yours”
Janel Lopez and Santiago Barrero
Check when to use a word as a verb and when to use it as a noun
BorrarCheck the punctuation
The last word is not well built.
Sccore: 4,0
Mr. sue jenkins
ResponderBorrarcordially , i write from of colombia and very surprised for your invitation of the event,also wanted to tank you for invitation
I confirmed the attendance to the event
one question please :¿where is the event? because i haven't idea where is
two question: i can take a colleague , because my colleague me ask if he can go to the event
thank you
best regards juan esteban hernandez
bye
Check spelling and punctuation. I not i
Borraronly one question mark at the end is needed
Check the sentence order
Score: 3,8
Mr. Sue Jenkins
ResponderBorrarGood morning
Comfirmed the attendance to the event of the presentations of renewable energy.
Since this can improve the vision of ecological change, I am grateful that I was remembered and invited to this important event.
I'm on the lookout for your instructions.
Once again I thank you for your invitation.
if you'd like to talk to me, call from 6:00AM to 12:00PM.
best regards
Mr. Smith
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BorrarScore:1,0
Good morning Mrs.Jenkis
ResponderBorrarFirst of all I wanted to thank for you invitation,and of course i will attend,but I have 3 questions
1.Can you give me the address of the event to arrive please?
2.Can I take my girlfriend to the event? since she is a scientist then I could interest her to the subject
3.Shoud we go elegant to the event?
And finally I consider that the renewable energy proyect helps because they are sources of energy and reduces the pollution
thank you
sincerely
mr.Smith
submitted by :Maria Paula Marin Martinez and Kelly Fernanda Hernandez Rodriguez
Persons is countabe, use many.
ResponderBorrarNew things: adjective before noun
Score: 4,5
You missed some words to give coherence to the text
ResponderBorrarCheck punctuation
Score:4,3
Check punctution. I not i
ResponderBorrarThis work was uploaded out of time
Score: 4.0